Rapunzel Speaks 8: Requesting customer feedback

Monday, May 16th, 2005 @ 10:14 am | Story-teller

I was going to write about it anyway, but I got held back for a bit.

So now, where was I?

Ah yes. I was talking about me rasping in stupor over the suddenly wonder that Mark was not only after my body. Although, of course, later, he did admit that lust rated 55% in his reasons of attraction list.

But the first time…

***

Look. I've never, ever, ever, been with a guy before. I've been kissed of course, but not when I'm completely naked with a guy. Yes, yes, the day before, Mark had come in and given me a very good prelude of things to come. But, if you remember well, I was in a very tight corset, and there wasn't much he could do. He just flicked his tongue over my lips a little (my lips, on both ends of me), and toyed with me a little, but it wasn't nearly satisfying.

So I was actually looking forward to the first time. Which was why on the third time he came, I was prepared, in my sexiest best, you know, do what a girl can do best to keep her man happy.

That was my only intention really. To make my man happy.

***

So, when Mark said, 'Rappy, dear. We have all day. Till 4.30 p.m. I want to talk to you first. I want to see you first. We must talk of more important things. I want to talk about our life together, when you get out of here, when I can finally make you my queen,'

… there really was nothing more I could do but sit there with my mouth gaping like a goldfish in dangling suspension. I think the movements of my mouth, opening and closing like that, was too much for Mark to bear, and swearing coarsely, he swooped upon me like an eagle pouncing on its prey.

Sweet.

Do you want the graphic details?

Whatever I'll write next depends completely on customer feedback.

Previously on Rapunzel Speaks:
RS 1: My name and how I came to be
RS 2: That famous long hair of mine
RS 3: About the silk rope
RS 4: Why Mark
RS 5: Mark and what happened on Day Two
RS 6: At first sight
RS 7: My Mark. My Mark. My darling Mark.

16 Responses to “Rapunzel Speaks 8: Requesting customer feedback”

  1. poh Says:

    hey, very refreshing twist to a boring fairy tale.

    details are graphic, yes, but it’s what makes the story so engaging.

    have stumbled onto your website through a link, and managed to read back every single entry of yours.

    keep it up, perks up a guy like me, especially when I am stuck here in the ulu parts of china for work.

  2. Janus Says:

    Graphic details? Hmm, so now you’re diversifying into the Mills and Boons genre eh?:twisted:

  3. cocacool Says:

    :wink: :cool: :wink:

  4. cocacool Says:

    cool

  5. barffie alt Says:

    OMG! I liiiiiiiiiike!!!! More more more!
    Who says it’s a twist. It’s just adding in more flesh to an otherwise plain silly story.

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  13. Anonnymous Says:

    Really different from the actual Rapunzel story and is a very interesting twist. Keep doin what u do

  14. cina_sesat Says:

    man… this girl rawks! i can’t stop moaning while reading it

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