Puisi Ala Malaysia
Nah. Cuba bacakan.
Sudah hampir nak sampai Merdeka
Rakyat Malaysia sangat gembira
Jalur Gemilang di merata-rata
Malah atas kereta dikibarkan juga
Malaysia ini banyak istimewa
Rakyat berbilang kaum agama
Cakap English pun campur Bahasa
Sampai orang putih pun pusing kepala
Hang Li Poh berasal dari China
Beribu-ribu batu sampailah ke Melaka
Berkahwin dengan Melayu berlahirkan anak Baba
Isterinya nama Nyonya masak pelbagai rasa
Makanan di Malaysia, sedap-sedap belaka
Sampai jadi jeles, rakyat Singapura
Gelas air sejuk, pastikan sedia ada
Nanti terlampau pedas, api keluar telinga
Char kuey teow mesti tambah kerang
Nasi lemak best bersambal udang
Bakar sate daging, api hendaklah terang
24-hr mamak, kita makan sampai kenyang
Kalau nak beli batik, pergilah ke Kelantan
Kalau hendak menyelam, jom pergi Sipadan
Kalau nak relaks, cubalah pantai Kuantan
Bercutilah dalam negara bersama rakan-rakan
Model paling femes siapa yang tertanya
Memang muka endorsement, milik Amber Chia
Jam tangan, Jeans, Sampai kerusi pun ada
Nasib baik barangan itu semua buatan Malaysia.
Di Malaysia, ramai orang ternama
Kalau pandu kereta, mesti pasang Era
Milik suara merdu pasti Siti Nurhaliza
'Selamat pengantin baru', diucapkan kepadanya
Masuk alam siber, pula ada blogosfera
Ramai pula orang sibuk-sibuk belaka
Melayu, Cina, India, kaum lain lain pun ada
Paling ramai pengunjungnya, pastilah Kenny Sia
Ada si Vincent Lau, cuba nak bergembira
Anjurkan festival Project Happy Malaysia
Kalau anda semua sayangkan negara kita,
Jom marilah semua kita bersuka ria!
August 29th, 2006 at 3:50 pm
Impressive pantun ini saya baca,
Ada perasaan sweet ada juga sour,
Skirt pendek nama timangnya,
Kecil kecil cili padi itulah Dia.
August 29th, 2006 at 4:01 pm
che wah bagus lah ni ye
berbalas-balas pantun sanggup juga
manalah saya tahu kenapa juga
short pendek jadi skirt pendek pula
August 29th, 2006 at 7:15 pm
I really like how you campur-campur all the diverse Malaysian characteristic together… although I think there is a bit of uneveness in the thythm, particularly the regular metrics that i think is mainly associated with this form.
Happy Merdeka! Hope that negara kita Malaysia lives up to what it truly can be!
August 29th, 2006 at 8:21 pm
Minishort ni memanglah terror,
Blognya cun puisi pun ada gaya,
Enjoy sangat baca dia punya karya,
Harap boleh selalu terhibur juga.
enjoyed ur puisi..
*might be better if u use ‘geleng kepala’ instead of ‘pusing kepala’ =)
August 29th, 2006 at 9:44 pm
pusing kepala is the typical ‘indian’ style of saying geleng kepala mah… it’s funnier that way.
August 29th, 2006 at 9:48 pm
Love both!
The earlier one more Manglish - loved it more!
i LOVE being Malaysian!!
August 29th, 2006 at 10:22 pm
Minishorts very pretty. After eat satay, even more bouncy.
August 29th, 2006 at 10:45 pm
Esok malam tengok bunga api,
Tengok bunga api di KLCC,
Telima kasih kepada frostee bradder,
Salah translation, my mistake ler,
August 30th, 2006 at 2:21 am
Here goes nothing…
Tiap tiap pagi saya menggosok gigi,
Makan roti dan minum kopi,
Tengok ah moi saya melari-lari,
Boyfriend tengok pukul saya mati.
August 30th, 2006 at 5:27 pm
2 Kenny
Pagi Pagi pergi sabah
Bawa baju dalam baldi
Tengoh ah moi memang tak salah
Jagan la asik tengok body
September 1st, 2006 at 3:49 pm
much improvment from ur first one :P~
o/t: incidentally minishorts.net was down for a few?
August 1st, 2007 at 10:11 pm
too good!Too best la!
October 23rd, 2007 at 9:42 am
this poem is very interesting..anyone who read this poem must want to read it again..although it alredy late but i’m still want to greet
October 23rd, 2007 at 9:45 am
this poem is yery interesting..
that is what i want to talk about…
last but not least happy merdeka day